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The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. NrPp2
The Diagram Illustrates How Aluminium Cans Recycled. Overall THe Process Consist OF Seven Consecutive Steps Beginning With Providing Special Bin For Kepting Cans Instead of Throughing Away. And Ending Up With Making New Cans. Firstly These Can Collected From Bin And Sent To Factories by Truck. Secondly With The Help Special Equipment Cleaning, Sorting, Shredding And Compressing Can Be Done. Subsequentally In the Next Step These Can Heated In Enough Temperature To Allow Aluminium To Melt. It is then Rolled Out With 2. 5mm to 6mm Thick. Meanwhile Aluminium Can Is recycled ANd Sent to Soft Drinks Factories at There They Get Filled And Sold To Public. Remarkable 74% Of Can Recycled In UK And Used Agian.
The Diagram Illustrates How
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Aluminium
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Cans
Recycled.

Overall
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THe
Process Consist OF Seven Consecutive Steps Beginning With Providing Special Bin For
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Kepting
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Cans
Instead
of
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Throughing
Away. And Ending Up With Making New Cans.

Firstly
These
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Can
Collected From Bin And
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Sent
To Factories by Truck.
Secondly
With The
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Help
Special Equipment Cleaning, Sorting, Shredding And Compressing
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Can
Be Done
.

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Subsequentally
In the
Next
Step These
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Can
Heated In
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Enough
Temperature To
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Allow
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Aluminium
To Melt. It is then Rolled Out With 2.
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5mm
to
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6mm
Thick.
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Meanwhile
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Aluminium
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Can
Is recycled
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ANd
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Sent
to Soft Drinks
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Factories


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at
There They
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Get
Filled And Sold To Public. Remarkable 74% Of
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Can
Recycled In UK And
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Used
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Agian
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
117 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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