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The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. 2bQ1k
The pie charts compare what reason of people choose to work by car or by cycling. At a first glance, most people recommend cycling to work because of health and fitness and less pollution. Moreover, the primary reason of people thinks driving to work by car is comfortable. As can be seen, health and fitness and less pollution are same proportion with 30% respectively, that is why people like to ride the bicycle to work. Also, people can easily find the parking area to park their bicycle, which accounted for 15%. Furthermore, 14% of people prefer bicycle as they don’t need to pay much money for their bicycle, this figure is very similar to why people think it is faster than driving, at 13%. The driver feels comfortable is the main factor that they choose driving to work constituted to 40 per cent. A large number of people, 21%, prefer to drive because they think the work location is too far away from home. Next, driving is faster than cycling, with 14% of people choosing it, which is the same figure for people needing to carry belongings to work. Finally, only a small number a minority, 11%, driver prefer driving to work as it is safer than cycling.
The pie charts compare what reason of
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people
choose to
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work
by car or by
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cycling
. At a
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glance, most
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people
recommend
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cycling
to
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work
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because
of health and fitness and less pollution.
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, the primary reason of
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people
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thinks
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driving
to
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work
by car is comfortable.

As can be
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seen
, health and fitness and less pollution are same proportion with 30%
respectively
,
that is
why
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people
like to ride the
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bicycle
to
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work
.
Also
,
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people
can
easily
find the parking area to park their
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bicycle
, which accounted for 15%.
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, 14% of
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people
prefer
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bicycle
as they don’t need to pay much money for their
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bicycle
, this figure is
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very
similar to why
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people
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think
it is faster than
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driving
, at 13%.

The driver feels comfortable is the main factor that they choose
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driving
to
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work
constituted to 40 per cent.
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, 21%, prefer to drive
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they
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the
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work
location is too far away from home.
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,
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driving
is faster than
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cycling
, with 14% of
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people
choosing it, which is the same figure for
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people
needing to carry belongings to
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work
.
Finally
,
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number a minority, 11%, driver prefer
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to
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work
as it is safer than
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cycling
.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

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3 paragraphs
208 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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