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The diagram below shows the process that is used to treat tea leaves and produce tea bags

The diagram below shows the process that is used to treat tea leaves and produce tea bags VyYGw
The diagram illustrates how to treat the fresh tea leaves and produce tea bags Overall, the describes involves 8 main steps begin with drying out the leaves with blasts of hot air and finish with packing and selling At first, tea leaves is put into the dryer to make them become withering. Then, they are taken out and put on the crusher which crush them into the smaller pieces. when that step completed, the tea leaves is moved on the bigger crusher, in which making them become splinter. After that, different types of tea are arranged on rails to match its size to in order to sift the pieces of tea leaves. The next step is mixing material, The splinter is mixed with some flavors such as peppermints, ginger, . . . . which make tea have more full-bodied. The following step is measuring, the mixture will be put on the square which measure the amount of tea, approximately 2g each pile. Then, the mixture is sealled in bags before selling. Finally, Tea bags are packed and delivered to the place of consumption
The diagram illustrates how to treat the fresh
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bags

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with drying out the
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with blasts of hot air and finish with packing and selling

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,
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is put
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make
them become withering. Then, they
are taken
out and put on the crusher which crush them into the smaller pieces.
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when
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completed, the
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is
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moved
on the bigger crusher, in which making them become splinter. After that,
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different
types of
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are arranged
on rails to match its size to in order to sift the pieces of
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tea
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leaves
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is mixing material, The splinter
is mixed
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flavors such as peppermints, ginger
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have more full-bodied. The following
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is measuring, the mixture will
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on the square which measure the amount of
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tea
, approximately 2g each pile. Then, the mixture is
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sealled
in bags
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selling.
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bags
are packed
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process that is used to treat tea leaves and produce tea bags

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