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The pie chart below shows the frequency of U.S. Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie chart compares the consistency of the U. S. Adults online buying habits, while the bar graph illustrates a deeper classification indicating the online shopping preferences. It is clear that most of the adults make online purchases less often than a few times a month. Moreover, an overwhelming majority of those who shop online rarely, tends to buy in physical stores. According to the bar chart, All, Weekly, and Less frequent online shoppers opted to buy in physical shops more frequently. Thus, more than 80% of Less frequent online shoppers tend to obtain goods from physical stores. Meanwhile, an equilibrium was almost reached among Monthly online shoppers, with more than 40% buying physically and less than 60% purchasing online. The only group, in which the percentage of those buying online, more than 60%, exceeded that of those who are prone to buying in physical stores, less than 40%, was the group of Weekly online shoppers. Looking at the pie chart, we can see that the majority of adults, 65%, shopped online a few times a month, or even less often. Those who shopped online weekly, were a minority comprising only 15%.
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pie chart compares the consistency of the U. S. Adults
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online
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buying
habits, while the bar graph illustrates a deeper classification indicating the
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online
shopping preferences.

It is
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clear
that most of the adults
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make
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online
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purchases
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less
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often
than a few times a month.
Moreover
, an overwhelming majority of those who shop
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online
rarely, tends to
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buy
in
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physical
stores.

According to the bar chart, All, Weekly, and
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Less
frequent
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online
shoppers opted to
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buy
in
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physical
shops more
frequently
.
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, more than 80% of
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Less
frequent
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online
shoppers tend to obtain
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goods
from
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physical
stores. Meanwhile, an equilibrium was almost reached among Monthly
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online
shoppers, with more than 40%
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buying
physically
and
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less
than 60% purchasing
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online
. The
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group, in which the percentage of those
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buying
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online
, more than 60%, exceeded that of those who are prone to
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buying
in
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physical
stores,
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less
than 40%, was the group of Weekly
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online
shoppers.

Looking at the pie chart, we can
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see
that the majority of adults, 65%, shopped
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online
a few times a month, or even
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less
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often
. Those who shopped
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online
weekly, were a minority comprising
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only
15%.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the frequency of U. S. Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences.

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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