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The diagram below shows the process of photosynthesis

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The given process illustrates how plants produce energy from sunlight. Overall, there are five stages, beginning with sunshine and carbon being absorbed and ending with the production of sugar First of all, the sun is trapped in the leaves of plants by chlorophyll to make leaves appear green. Then the carbon dioxide enters the leaf’s epidermis and cuticle, subsequently, carbon dioxide is absorbed from the atmosphere and this happens at the same time with the solar energy Water moves up through the roots and combines with CO2 and sunlight in the leaf to produce sugar. When the excess sugar is stored as starch in the roots, the products of photosynthesis are water vapor and oxygen escape by the process called transpiration

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 process illustrates how plants produce energy from sunlight. Overall
, there are five stages, beginning with sunshine and carbon being absorbed
 and ending with the production of sugar

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First of all
, the sun is trapped
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leaves
 of plants by chlorophyll to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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leaves
 appear green. Then the carbon dioxide enters the leaf’s epidermis and cuticle, subsequently
, carbon dioxide is absorbed
 from the atmosphere and this happens at the same time with the solar Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphenergy.energy!energy?energy:energy,energy;
energy


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moves
 up through the roots and combines with CO2 and sunlight in the leaf to produce sugar. When the excess sugar is stored
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transpiration