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The show graph monthly temperatures.

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The given line graph displays the information about the average monthly temperatures. units are calibrated in celcius. At fleeting glance, it is clear that in Paris temperature5 c in the starting point then incline qulikly in January to Jun and it remained constant in june as well as Augest. The temperture is decreased shirply in September and december. In dubai, the temoerature inclined firstly from Janyary to Augest after that it is declined thoughtout the poried. Moving further, in Sydney the temperature about 25 c in the begin point. Between January and July, the temperature nearly 12 c. It is rise slowly in July to Sepetember after that the temperature approixmately 25 c reach at similar point in October to December. Overall, it is crystal clear that the temperature in different month varied a lot.
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celcius
. At fleeting glance, it is
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clear
that in Paris
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temperature5
c in the starting point then incline
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qulikly
in January to Jun and it remained constant in
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june
as well
as
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Augest
. The
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temperture
is decreased
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shirply
in September and
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december
. In
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dubai
, the
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temoerature
inclined
firstly
from
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Janyary
to
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Augest
after that it
is declined
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thoughtout
the
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poried
. Moving
further
, in Sydney the
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temperature
about 25 c in the
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begin
point. Between January and July, the
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temperature
nearly
12 c. It is rise
slowly
in July to
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Sepetember
after that the
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temperature
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approixmately
25 c reach at similar point in October to December.
Overall
, it is crystal
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that the
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temperature
in
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month varied a lot.
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