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The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

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The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Generally speaking, there is little change in the projected proportion of production by the various sectors in the two years, with manufacturing and services being the most dominant. It is forecast that the services and manufacturing sectors together will account for more than half of global production in 2040 and 2060, 71% (40% and 31%) and 74% (41% and 33%) respectively. By contrast, the proportion of production from energy is expected to decline from 7% in 2040 to 5% in 2060, a drop of approximately one third. It is also anticipated that there will be a similar dramatic drop for agriculture production from 4% to 1% with production in materials, by contrast, comprising 4% in 2060 compared to 3% in 2040. As regards info-communications and technology, there is expected to be little difference in the proportion of production the sector constitutes, with a slight rise from 15% to 16% over the period.
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in 2040 and 2060.
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in the projected proportion of
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by the various
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in the two years, with manufacturing and services being the most dominant.

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together will account for more than half of global
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in 2040 and 2060, 71% (40% and 31%) and 74% (41% and 33%)
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from energy is
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to decline from 7% in 2040 to 5% in 2060, a drop of approximately one third. It is
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from 4% to 1% with
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in materials, by contrast, comprising 4% in 2060 compared to 3% in 2040.

As regards info-communications and technology, there is
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difference in the proportion of
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constitutes, with a slight rise from 15% to 16% over the period.
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