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The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. r9MJ
The pictures demonstrate involved in producing bricks to build industries. Overall, there are 7 stages in manufacturing bricks, begins with digging clay and finishing with delivering. To begin, at the first stage clay is dug from the ground. Then, clay is put through a metal gird and it passes onto a roller where it is mixed with sand and water. After that, the clay is shaped into bricks in two ways: either it is put in a mould, or a wire cutter is used. After the clay bricks are put to dry into drying oven for a one to two hours, the dried bricks are heated in a kiln at a moderate temperature (200-980 degrees Celsius) and then at a high temperature (870-1300 degrees Celsius). Once the bricks have been cooled in a cooling chamber in two or three days, they are packaged and then delivered to be sold in the market.
The pictures demonstrate involved in producing
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bricks
to build industries.

Overall
, there are 7 stages in manufacturing
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bricks
,
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begins
with digging
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clay
and finishing with delivering.

To
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begin
, at the
first
stage
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clay
is dug
from the ground. Then,
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clay
is put
through a metal gird and it passes onto a roller where it
is mixed
with sand and water. After that, the
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clay
is shaped
into
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bricks
in two ways: either it
is put
in a
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mould
, or a wire cutter is
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used
. After the
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clay
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bricks
are put
to dry into drying oven for a one to two hours, the dried
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bricks
are heated
in a kiln at a moderate temperature (200-980 degrees Celsius) and then at a high temperature (870-1300 degrees Celsius). Once the
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bricks
have
been cooled
in a cooling chamber in two or three days, they
are packaged
and then delivered to
be sold
in the market.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

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