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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 5eDQ
The given pie chart provides information about the amount of 5 groups of goods for foreign sale while the table illustrates the percentage changes in each category of exports in the selected years. In general, the most purchased items appeared to be petroleum products alongside engineered goods. Although the majority of categories experienced increases in the amount of export, the only exception was germs and jewelry commodities. To begin with, most groups of products had an upward trend. Export earnings from petroleum products rose from around 61 billion dollars in 2015 to 63 billion dollars in 2016, which was an increase of 3 percent. As for engineered goods, their income reached a similar level. In more details, the earnings went up by 8, 5 percent according to the table. Although the textile industry is the least purchased, it experienced the most dramatic 15, 24 percent increase in export revenue with earnings rising from 25 billion dollars to over 30 billion dollars from 2015 to 2016. In contrast, there was almost no change in the amount of money earned from agricultural products, which remained nearly stable, namely 30 billion dollars in 2016. Finally, a downward trend occurred in gems and jewellery commodities export earnings reduced by around 5 per cent from 43 to 49 billion dollars over a period of two years.
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goods
for foreign sale while the table illustrates the percentage
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changes
in each category of
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in the selected years.
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purchased
items appeared to be petroleum
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products
alongside engineered
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goods
. Although the majority of categories experienced increases in the amount of
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, the
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exception was germs and jewelry commodities. To
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with, most groups of
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products
had an upward trend.
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Export
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earnings
from petroleum
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rose from around 61
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billion
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in 2015 to 63
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billion
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in 2016, which was an increase of 3 percent. As for engineered
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goods
, their income reached a similar level. In more
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details
, the
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earnings
went up by 8, 5 percent according to the table. Although the textile industry is the least
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purchased
, it experienced the most dramatic 15, 24 percent increase in
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revenue with
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rising from 25
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to over 30
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from 2015 to 2016.
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change
in the amount of money earned from agricultural
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, which remained
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in 2016.
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jewellery
commodities
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by around 5 per cent from 43 to 49
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over a period of two years.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

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