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The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. g6eL
The given diagram shows different stages of brick manufacturing for the building industries. Generally speaking, brick production involves 7 steps, starting from the digging stages and ending at the delivery stage. As is given in the graph, the first step of brick manufacturing is digging the clay with a large digger. This clay is then filtered and processed in a roller machine and then mixed with sand and water. In the third stage, the mixture is either kept in a mould or cut in a wire cutter to make the raw shape of the bricks. In the next step, the shaped raw bricks are dried for 24 to 48 hours in a drying oven. After that, the dried raw bricks are kept in a kiln, both in moderate and high temperature, up to 1300 degree centigrade and then placed in a cooling chamber for about 48 to 72 hours. This process makes the brick to be packed and delivered in the final two steps. The delivery process is the final process of brick manufacturing and as it is noted, brick making is a moderately complex process that requires some predefined works to make it usable.
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different
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manufacturing for the building industries.
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brick
production involves 7
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steps
, starting from the digging stages and ending at the delivery stage.

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in the graph, the
first
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of
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brick
manufacturing is digging the clay with a large digger. This clay is then filtered and processed in a roller machine and then mixed with sand and water. In the third stage, the mixture is either
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kept
in a
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or
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cut
in a wire cutter to
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make
the raw shape of the
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bricks
. In the
next
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, the shaped raw
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bricks
are dried
for 24 to 48 hours in a drying oven. After that, the dried raw
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bricks
are
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kept
in a kiln, both in moderate and high temperature, up to 1300 degree centigrade and then placed in a cooling chamber for about 48 to 72 hours. This
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process
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makes
the
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brick
to
be packed
and delivered in the final two
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steps
. The delivery
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process
is the final
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of
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brick
manufacturing and as it
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,
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brick
making is a
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process
that requires
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predefined works to
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it usable.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

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