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The chart below show what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years.

The chart below show what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. 72dk
The given pie chart illustrates the career path of anthropology graduates. The table, however, compares the income of anthropologists in different types of employment after 5 years of working. Overall, full-time work constituted the main destination after completing studies. In the government sector, moreover, the highest percentage of graduates generated the most lucrative revenue after 5 years’ work in comparison to another sectors. According to the pie chart, full-time workers accounted for just over half of anthropology graduates, substantially more than part-time workers, comprising 15%. Just over one tenth (12%) of alumni was not employed. Those who chose full-time postgraduation study or those with unknown occupation stood at 8% each. Only 5% were doing both part-time work and postgraduate study. In terms of salaries, 40% of freelance consultants earned $75, 000 - $99, 999 equally to those with income more than $100, 000. Whereas 50% of government workers generated the highest revenue in the government sector, by 20% less reached over $100, 000 in private companies. The highest proportion of employees with the lowest income ($25, 000 – $49, 999) was seen in private companies accounting for 10% in comparison to only 5% of anthropologist in the government sector and as freelance consultants.
The
given
pie chart illustrates the career path of anthropology graduates. The table,
however
, compares the income of anthropologists in
different
types of employment after 5 years of working.

Overall
, full-time work constituted the main destination after completing studies. In the
government
sector,
moreover
, the highest percentage of graduates generated the most lucrative revenue after 5 years’ work
in comparison
to another sectors.

According to the pie chart, full-time workers accounted for
just
over half of anthropology graduates,
substantially
more than part-time workers, comprising 15%.
Just
over one tenth (12%) of alumni was not employed. Those who chose full-time
postgraduation
study or those with unknown occupation stood at 8% each.
Only
5% were doing both part-time work and postgraduate study.

In terms of salaries, 40% of freelance consultants earned $75, 000
-
$99, 999
equally
to those with income more than $100, 000. Whereas 50% of
government
workers generated the highest revenue in the
government
sector, by 20% less reached over $100, 000 in private
companies
. The highest proportion of employees with the lowest income ($25, 000
$49, 999) was
seen
in private
companies
accounting for 10%
in comparison
to
only
5% of anthropologist in the
government
sector and as freelance consultants.
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IELTS academic The chart below show what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years.

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