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The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

The given diagram shows different stages of brick manufacturing for the building industries. Overall, brick production involves 7 steps, starting from the digging stages and ending at the delivery stage. As is given the graph, the first step of brick manufacturing is digging the clay with a large digger. This clay is then filtered and processed in a roller machine then mixed with sand and water. In the third stage, the mixture is either capt in a mould or cut in a wire cutter to make the raw shape of the bricks. In the next step, the snape raw bricks are dried for 24 to 48 hours in a drying oven. After that, the dried raw bricks are kept in a klin, both in moderate and high temperature, up to 1300 degree centigrade and then placed in a cooling chamber for about 48 to 72 hour. This process makes the brick to be packed and delivered in the final to steps. The delivery is the final process of brick making and as it is noted, brick manufacturing is a moderetly complex process that requires some pre defined works to make it usable.
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manufacturing for the building industries.
Overall
,
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production involves 7
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, starting from the digging
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stages
and ending at the delivery
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manufacturing is digging the clay with a large digger. This clay is then filtered and processed in a roller machine then mixed with sand and water. In the third
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stage
, the mixture is either capt in a
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mould
or
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in a wire cutter to
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the raw shape of the
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bricks
. In the
next
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, the
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raw
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are dried
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are
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in a
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, both in moderate and high temperature, up to 1300 degree centigrade and then placed in a cooling chamber for about 48 to 72
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. This process
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. The delivery is the final process of
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making and as it
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,
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manufacturing is a
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complex process that requires
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

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