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The diagram below shows the process by which advertisements are produced.

The diagram below shows the process by which advertisements are produced. kLe3n
The diagram provide a process of how advertisements are produced. Generally, the procedure involves six steps, starting from preparing strategic plans and ending with publishing the advertisement production. First, objectives and messages involved in strategic advertising plan is initiated and then forwarded to advertising agency’ team. Next, people in the team will work together to come up with possible ideas and then the most suitable ideas will be fully considered by the client. After that, the advertising agency’ team take the ideas and develop the concept. Following this, the client and agency will gather together to inspect and adjust the advertisement. Finally, it is put into production and the best version of advertisement will be published.
The diagram
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a process of how
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advertisements
are produced
.
Generally
, the procedure involves six steps, starting from preparing strategic plans and ending with publishing the
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advertisement
production.

First
, objectives and messages involved in strategic advertising plan
is initiated
and then forwarded to advertising agency’ team.
Next
,
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people
in the team will work together to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
up with possible
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and then the most suitable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
will be
fully
considered by the client. After that, the advertising agency’ team take the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and develop the concept. Following this, the client and agency will gather together to inspect and adjust the
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advertisement
.
Finally
, it
is put
into production and the best version of
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advertisement
will
be published
.
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