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Today, I’d like to tell you about a person who I really like. A person that I really like is my friend, his name is Thọ. I met him at school. And we have been classmate since I was in grade 6. But just since 3 years, we have become close friend. Because when I studied at secondary school, I was quite introverted so I didn’t have so many friends. After that when I studied at high school, my personality was more open. In other that I had more friend and Thọ was one of them. After sitting in front of him in grade 10 we became close friend because he is very kind. He is willing to help me whenever I have problem not only in study but also in other fields. I remembered in one day, I asked him whether I had a problem and wanted to confide with him at 2 a. m and his answer made me so touched. he said certainly he was very willing. In addition, when I sad he’s there for me and give me some useful advices I I really graceful for that. And I think the most important to make us to become best friend is that we have the same view in several areas. He have been together for three years and he’s part of my family and I hope our relationship will be forever long lasted.
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part of my family and I hope our relationship will be forever long lasted.

IELTS academic describe a person who you really like

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1 paragraphs
237 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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