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Tables: different types of cars

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The given table compares the diverse types of cars in terms of price, engine size and miles per gallon. Overall, it can be clearly seen from the table that the brand car of Germany, Volkswagen Golf has the highest price and greatest engine size among 3 other well-known transports. German Volkswagen Golf costs highest, at $18250, compared with $15800 for Ford Focus of US. With a little respect of price, the Japanese Toyota Corolla and Nissan Micra account for $15550 and $15500. The engine size of Golf contributed more than 1500cc, whereas the both Toyota in Japan and American Ford show the same figure, 1400cc. According to the engine size, Nissan of Japan has the smalles proportion, merely 1200cc. However, Germany is the leader due to the two price and size of engine, its miles per gallon are the shortest, only 40. By contrast, Japan's Toyota and USA Ford drive 48 and 50 miles per gallon respectively, while Japanese Nissan drives the longest mile among all other 3 cars, 52 miles per gallon.
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from the table that the brand car of Germany, Volkswagen Golf has the highest
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among 3 other well-known transports. German Volkswagen Golf costs highest, at $18250, compared with $15800 for Ford Focus of US. With a
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, the Japanese Toyota Corolla and Nissan
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account for $15550 and $15500. The
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of Golf contributed more than 1500cc, whereas the both Toyota in Japan and American Ford
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the same figure, 1400cc. According to the
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, Nissan of Japan has the
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1200cc.
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