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Pie charts: valentine's day gifts

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The given graphs provide information about the different forms of presents that are bought by males and females on fourteenth of February in the US. Overall, what stand out from the graphs is that card, flowers and candy are preferred not only by men, but also by women. In terms of top gift, the card is purchased mostly among the others with respective proportion, at 18% of men and 27% of women. The second most common gift for such occasion are flowers, at 16% for gentlemen, at the same time the candy at 21% is chosen secondly by ladies. On the other hand, just over 10% of womenwould rather flowers, which is given as the most popular gift after candy, and conversely, candy at 14% is the third most popular choice of men. It is clear that regarding other presents, Valentine's Day cards are most preferred choice of both genders, men and women.
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