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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a sea turtles

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a sea turtles 0aNnB

The given picture illustrates the biological cycle of sea turtles. Overall, the process comprises a number of steps, beginning with the hatching eggs to become mature ones, then the adults mating and ending with the birth of the new generations. First of all, the mature turtles move from the foraging areas — coastal shallow water to the mating areas, where male and female adults mate. After that, the feminine turtles migrate in 2 weeks to the bank of the sea in order to nesting, while the masculines come back to the foraging areas. Once the females finish laiding down the eggs, whether those come back to mating zones to match again or return to the foraging zones. The process continues with the eggs being incubated by the sand in 8 to 10 weeks, this step is followed by the hatching of those into tiny turtles. The new-born turtles go to the ocean immediately, before taking a step to become immature, those getting lost in the ocean in 5 to 20 years. The immature turtles subsequently involve in the developmental migration to the coastal shallow water, where becomes its settlement.

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 picture illustrates the biological cycle of sea You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtortoise
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. Overall
, the process comprises a number of steps, beginning with the hatching eggs to become mature ones, then the adults mating and ending with the birth of the new generations.

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First of all
, the mature You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtortoise
turtles
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move
 from the foraging areas — coastal shallow water to the mating areas, where male and female adults mate. After that, the feminine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtortoise
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 migrate in 2 weeks to the bank of the sea in order to Did you mean "nest"?nest
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, while the masculines This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
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 down the eggs, whether those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
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 back to mating zones to match again or return to the foraging zones.

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turtles
. The new-born You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtortoise
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before
 taking a step to become immature, those getting lost in the ocean in 5 to 20 years. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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turtles
subsequently
 involve in the developmental migration to the coastal shallow water, where becomes its settlement. 