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Line chart show the sales of children s books , adult fiction, educational books in 2002 to 2006.

Line chart show the sales of children s books, adult fiction, educational books in 2002 to 2006. kb3Xn
The assigned line graph expound the information about the sales of three distinguish type of books from 2002 to 2006 in one country. the data was calibrated in dollar. To begin within, in 2002, adultfiction was top with the marketing of 45 million dollars later it sharply decreased at 38 million dollars in next year. Followed by, there was dramatic declined about 30 million dollar in 2006. Education book was least sold in 2002 about 22 million dollars considerably. and after that their sale showes a slightly climbed at 31 million dollars in 2003. Probing further, transaction of education books remain stable from 2003 to 2005 almost 22 million dollars. Next year this fraction rise to 30 million dollars. Moreover, in 2002, children's book was 32 million dollar which had been escalated at 42 million dollar in following year as well as the sales of children book went up to 55 million dollars in 200Overall, it is clear from above graph that sales of children's book was grew in three gives period. However, adult fiction accounted a least popularity in 2006.
The assigned line graph expound the information about the
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sales
of three distinguish type of
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books
from 2002 to 2006 in one country.
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the
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dollar
. To
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begin
within, in 2002,
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adultfiction
was top with the marketing of 45
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million
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dollars
later it
sharply
decreased at 38
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million
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dollars
in
next
year. Followed by, there was dramatic declined about 30
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million
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dollar
in 2006. Education
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book
was least sold in 2002 about 22
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million
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dollars
considerably
.
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and
after that their
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sale
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showes
a
slightly
climbed at 31
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million
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dollars
in 2003.

Probing
further
, transaction of education
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books
remain stable from 2003 to 2005 almost 22
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million
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dollars
.
Next
year this fraction rise to 30
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million
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dollars
.
Moreover
, in 2002, children's
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book
was 32
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million
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dollar
which had
been escalated
at 42
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million
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dollar
in following year
as well
as the
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sales
of children
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book
went up to 55
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million
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dollars
in 200Overall, it is
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clear
from above graph that
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sales
of children's
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book
was grew in three gives period.
However
, adult fiction accounted
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a
least popularity in 2006.
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IELTS academic Line chart show the sales of children s books, adult fiction, educational books in 2002 to 2006.

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