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The diagram below shows the changes made in an Australian park. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes made.

The diagram below shows the changes made in an Australian park. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes made. XpWY

The given maps compare the transformations that have taken place in an Australian park. Overall, it is lucid that an Australian park has undergone significant changes over the period shown with the introductions of beaches, a cafe, barbie cue and tennis. Comparing two maps together is followed. Apparently, the ocean, a cycle path and park avenue have been located in the same direction as an Australian park since the period from 2015 to 2020. There were some trees on the west side of the park in the past, but now there have formulated beaches and a barbie cue on the right of the trees. Although soccer field has remained constant on the same side of a park, the place of trees and a cafe has superseded in a park. Some trees are planted on the right side of the soccer field. Finally, there was a tree in the south of the soccer field where tennis is now constructed.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps compare the transformations that have taken place in an Australian park.

Overall
, it is lucid that an Australian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has undergone significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 over the period shown with the introductions of beaches, a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
, barbie cue and tennis.

Comparing two maps together is followed
. Apparently
, the ocean, a cycle path and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 avenue have been located
 in the same direction as an Australian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 since the period from 2015 to 2020. There were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 on the west side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in the past, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 there have formulated beaches and a barbie cue on the right of the trees.

Although soccer field has remained constant on the same side of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, the place of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 and a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 has superseded in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
are planted
 on the right side of the soccer field. Finally
, there was a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
tree
 in the south of the soccer field where tennis is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 constructed. 