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The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in the different car categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework, and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in the different car categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework, and gardening. ) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see. L7Jp

The diagram in the up indicates hours without pay for women and men. Overall, when we take a look at the diagram we see married women's unpaid hours have increased. On the other hand, married men's have diminished. But we see married women's unpaid hours are more than married men's. At the beginning of the diagram, married women's unpaid hours without children were about 29. With 1 or 2 kids, it is up to almost 51 unpaid hours. It is getting worse, passing the diagram from the beginning to the end. With 3 and above 3 children at the end of the diagram, it seems approximately 55 without paying hours for married women. However, it does not mean only unfavorable things, but also there are some favorite things. Such as spend more time with their family. Well, when it comes to the married men without paying hours. The inception of the diagram is about 17 unpaid hours without children. But with 1 or juniors it demonstrates around 15 hours without paying. At the end of the diagram, with 3 and over 3 youngsters, it is decreasing down to about 13 unpaid hours. But on the contrary, it has some pessimistic sides. For instance, their family time is reducing.

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