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the two pie charts below show changes in world population

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The Pie chart illustrates the changes in international population between 1990 and 2000 From the first phase, it can be seen that 1600 million world population in 1990Asia has the largest population 60% in 1990. Europe has 25% of population whereas, North America has 5% of population. Africa has 4. 5%of population. Latin America And others has 3. 5% and 2. 5% respectively On the Other hand, It can be seen that Asia’s population declined to 54% in 2000. Europe population declined from 25% to 14%. Africa and Latin America population increased to 10% and 8% respectively in 2000. North east and Middle East has 6% of population whereas North America population remained constant and while others population increased to 3. 5% Overall, It can be seen the Asia has the most population whereas the North America population remained constant
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in 1990Asia has the largest
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60% in 1990. Europe has 25% of
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. Latin America
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has 3. 5% and 2. 5%
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that Asia’s
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declined to 54% in 2000. Europe
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declined from 25% to 14%. Africa and Latin America
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increased to 10% and 8%
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remained constant and while others
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increased to 3. 5%

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the Asia has the most
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remained constant
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IELTS academic the two pie charts below show changes in world population

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