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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The picture demonstrates the generation of hydoelectricity. The hydroelectric dam is significantly built at the banks of rivers. wholesome of machinaries are used in the production of hydroelectricity. The water stored in the reservoir is intaken by gates like structure and the intake water is passed through penstock which resembles like a pen, narrow shaped. A generator is held at power house and helps to generate the electricity with the help of turbine. The rod is attached to the generator and oval shaped pin is then attached to the rod of generator which is placed between penstock and turbine. The unused water for the production of hydro electricity is passed into the rivers. The generated electricity is thus passed through the power lines. these power lines are located at long distances. Thus the hydro electricity is generated in the hydoelectricity dam with the usage of reservoir water and transmitted through longDistance power Lines.
The picture demonstrates the generation of
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hydoelectricity
. The hydroelectric dam is
significantly
built at the banks of rivers.
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wholesome
of
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machinaries
are
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used
in the production of hydroelectricity.

The
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water
stored in the reservoir is
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intaken
by gates like structure and the intake
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water
is passed
through
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penstock
which resembles like a pen, narrow shaped. A generator
is held
at
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power
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house
and
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helps
to generate the
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electricity
with the
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help
of turbine. The rod
is attached
to the generator and oval shaped pin is then attached to the rod of generator which
is placed
between
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penstock
and turbine.

The unused
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water
for the production of hydro
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electricity
is passed
into the rivers.
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The
generated
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electricity
is
thus
passed through the
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power
lines.
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these
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power
lines
are located
at long distances.

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Thus
the hydro
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electricity
is generated
in the
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hydoelectricity
dam with the usage of reservoir
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water
and transmitted through
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longDistance
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power
Lines.

IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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