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The graph shows the sales of children’s book and all friction and education books between 2002 and 2006 in one country

The graph shows the sales of children’s book and all friction and education books between 2002 and 2006 in one country M25N
The lines chart gives information about, the selling of different type of books such as children’s, adult fiction, and fiction books in the year 2002 to 2006 in one the nation. The data is in a million dollars. Overall, it is seen clearly from the graph, the sales of children’s book increased over the period while, rest of two types of books decreased. Looking at the chart in more details, it is evident that the amount of earning, which came from the children’s book rose drastically from $32 million in 2002 to $41 million in 2003 but, next two years, that amount slowly increase. At the end, it reached a peak position at $58 million in 2006. Turning to the remaining data, the amount of income, which came from the fiction book declined from $45 million in 2002 to $30 million in 2006. In contrast, the sale of education books grew from $23 million in 2002 to $32 million in 2006.
The lines chart gives information about, the selling of
different
type of
books
such as children’s, adult fiction, and fiction
books
in the year 2002 to 2006 in one the nation. The data is in a
million
dollars.

Overall
, it is
seen
clearly
from the graph, the sales of children’s
book
increased over the period while, rest of two types of
books
decreased.

Looking at the chart in more
details
, it is evident that the amount of earning, which came from the children’s
book
rose
drastically
from $32
million
in 2002 to $41
million
in 2003
but
,
next
two years, that amount
slowly
increase. At the
end
, it reached a peak position at $58
million
in 2006. Turning to the remaining data, the amount of income, which came from the fiction
book
declined from $45
million
in 2002 to $30
million
in 2006.
In contrast
, the sale of education
books
grew from $23
million
in 2002 to $32
million
in 2006.
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