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The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. 6W9K

The graph compares how many visitors had worldwide museums between 1980 and 2015. The best of all four charts was museum in Louvre where the number of visitors was even though gently falling between years 1995 and 2000 but at the end the number of tourists was the highest. The second very good growth made Vatican Museums where was the amount of visitors only rising and almost was the same as in Louvre. But the graph lines illustrate that there were also museums that had not succeeded so much. London Science Museum had the best attendance from 1980 until 1985 and it was 4 million visitors than it was decreasing to almost 2 million. In Shenzhen Museum the number was modestly falling down but in 2000 the amount of tourists was getting back on the same number as in 1980. In summarise, the best results had Louvre museum where at the end was around 9 million people visiting this museum and the worse was London Science museum where the amount was almost 2 million visitor what is the lowest number.

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