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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. D57A
The given diagram shows how the weather information is collected by Australian Bureau of Meteorology to provide accurate and updated weather forecasting. As is observed from the given illustration, the weather information collection is done via satellites, radars and drifting buoys and then analysed before broadcasting them to the public. As is presented in the diagram, the weather information is collected using three different types of sources namely, satellites, radars and drifting buoys. The raw data collected from satellites is basically satellite photos while radar information is observed from the radar screens and the synoptic charts are yielded from the drifting buoys and these three types of data are fed into a computer system to analyse and prepare the weather news for broadcasting. After that, the weather, the news is broadcasted in different public media like televisions, radios and telephones. The final information regarding the weather is provided to the public via TV news, radio broadcasting and as a recorded announcement in devices like telephones.
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forecasting. As
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from the
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information
collection
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radars
and drifting buoys and then
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before
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weather
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information
is collected
using three
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different
types of sources
namely
, satellites,
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radars
and drifting buoys. The raw data collected from satellites is
basically
satellite photos while
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radar
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information
is observed
from the
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radar
screens and the synoptic charts
are yielded
from the drifting buoys and these three types of data
are fed
into a computer system to
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analyse
and prepare the
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weather
news for broadcasting.

After that, the
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weather
, the news
is broadcasted
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different
public media like televisions, radios and telephones. The final
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weather
is provided
to the public via TV news, radio broadcasting and as a recorded announcement in devices like telephones.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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