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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Ljdp
The given figure illustrates the process used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to forecast the weather. There are four stages in the process, beginning with the collection of information about the weather. This information is then analysed, prepared for presentation and finally broadcast to the public. Looking at the first and second stages of the process, there are three ways of collecting weather data and three ways of analysing it. Firstly, incoming information can be received by satellite and presented for analysis as a satellite photo. The same data can also be passed to a radar station and presented on a radar screen or synoptic chart. Finally, drifting buoys also receive data which can be shown on a synoptic chart. In the third stage of the process, the weather broadcast is prepared on computers. Finally, it is delivered to the public on television, on the radio or as a recorded telephone announcement.
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by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to forecast the
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weather
. There are four stages in the
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process
, beginning with the collection of information about the
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weather
. This information is then
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analysed
, prepared for presentation and
finally
broadcast to the public.

Looking at the
first
and second stages of the
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process
, there are three ways of collecting
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weather
data and three ways of
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analysing
it.
Firstly
, incoming information can
be received
by satellite and presented for analysis as a satellite photo. The same data can
also
be passed
to a radar station and presented on a radar screen or synoptic chart.
Finally
, drifting buoys
also
receive data which can
be shown
on a synoptic chart. In the third stage of the
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process
, the
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weather
broadcast
is prepared
on computers.
Finally
, it
is delivered
to the public on television, on the radio or as a recorded telephone announcement.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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