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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. meEO
Ways of data gathering, its analysis and weather forecasting, as well as broadcasting methods followed by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to produce accurate weather forecast, are illustrated in the process flowchart. As shown in the diagram, the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects information from different sources, like satellites hovering in space, radar sets positioned at different places on the Earth and drifting buoys anchored to the seabed in the vicinity of the continent. Before forecasting all input data need to be analyzed, using radar screens and synoptic charts. The former is designed on the basis of source materials coming from the satellite and radar sets, whereas the latter is compiled on the basis of the information from all sources mentioned above. As soon as the information analyzed and the forecast is done, it is prepared for broadcasting. Finally, precisely prepared forecast information reaches TV studios, radio stations and places where it can be recorded for further announcement.
Ways of data gathering, its analysis and weather forecasting,
as well
as broadcasting methods followed by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to produce accurate weather forecast,
are illustrated
in the process flowchart.

As shown in the diagram, the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects
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different
sources, like satellites hovering in space, radar sets positioned at
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places on the Earth and drifting buoys anchored to the seabed in the vicinity of the continent.
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Before
forecasting all input data need to
be analyzed
, using radar screens and synoptic charts. The former
is designed
on the basis of source materials coming from the satellite and radar sets, whereas the latter
is compiled
on the basis of the
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information
from all sources mentioned above. As
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soon
as the
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information
analyzed and the forecast
is done
, it
is prepared
for broadcasting.
Finally
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precisely
prepared forecast
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information
reaches TV studios, radio stations and places where it can
be recorded
for
further
announcement.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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