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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. KOd6
The illustration provides information about the process of collecting current and reliable weather forecasts and then broadcasting this to mass people which are conducted by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. As can be seen, this process needs some equipment to gather news forecasts and three main sources, such as satellite, radar, and the drifting buoy is used for collecting weather information. To begin with, the satellite is used to capture images of Australian weather from the outside of the planet. Meanwhile, radar can give screen pictures while a drifting buoy which is placed on the sea reveals a synoptic chart of the Australian climate. Subsequently, all of the information is analysed to know the real weather condition in Australia. After that, these data are put on the computer to prepare the report for the public broadcast. People will know the weather forecasts in Australia through various media, in particular, TV newsreader, radio, and recorded announcement.
The illustration provides information about the process of collecting
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current
and reliable
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weather
forecasts and then broadcasting this to mass
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people
which
are conducted
by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology.

As can be
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seen
, this process needs
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some
equipment to gather news forecasts and three main sources, such as satellite, radar, and the drifting buoy is
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used
for collecting
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weather
information.

To
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begin
with, the satellite is
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used
to capture images of Australian
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weather
from the outside of the planet. Meanwhile, radar can give screen pictures while a drifting buoy which
is placed
on the sea reveals a synoptic chart of the Australian climate.

Subsequently
,
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all of the
information is
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analysed
to know the real
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weather
condition in Australia. After that, these data
are put
on the computer to prepare the report for the public broadcast.
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People
will know the
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weather
forecasts in Australia through various media,
in particular
, TV newsreader, radio, and recorded announcement.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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155 words
6.5
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