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Millions of Visitors to European Cities

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The supplied bar chart illustrates the data concerning the number of visitors to Barcelona, Lisbon, and Venice from 2016 to 2020. Overall, it is obvious that the European city of Lisbon was less famous by visitors comparing with others, while the number of visitors to Venice and Barcelona fluctuated between the given period. During the initial two years, the number of visitors remained stable at almost over 20 million in Barcelona. Consequently, it surged to just over 23 million in 2018. However, there was a slight plunge in the figure of visitors to Barcelona by a narrow margin in 2019. Then, the figure dipped tremendously to under 5 million in 2020. According to Lisbon, there was a fluctuation in the number of visitors as it starts at over 8 million. Then it increased by a few million in 2017. In contrast to 2019, the number of visitors in 2018 was smaller by around 5 million. Following this, the graph demonstrates its nadir number in 2020 with almost 1 million. Furthermore, the data about Venice shown that the number of visitors went up constantly over the four years from 2016. Nevertheless, it dropped substantially by approximately 17 million in 2020. Ultimately, it is noticeable that the figures on the bar graph were not stable during the following five years.
The supplied bar chart illustrates the data concerning the
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to Barcelona, Lisbon, and Venice from 2016 to 2020.
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visitors
comparing with others, while the
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of
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visitors
to Venice and Barcelona fluctuated between the
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remained stable at almost
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20
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million
in Barcelona.
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, it surged to
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23
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in 2018.
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, there was a slight plunge in the figure of
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to Barcelona by a narrow margin in 2019. Then, the figure dipped
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million
in 2020. According to Lisbon, there was a fluctuation in the
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. Then it increased by a few
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in 2017.
In contrast
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in 2018 was smaller by around 5
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. Following this, the graph demonstrates its nadir
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in 2020 with almost 1
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.
Furthermore
, the data about Venice shown that the
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went up
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the four years from 2016.
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in 2020.
Ultimately
, it is noticeable that the figures on the bar graph were not stable during the following five years.
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IELTS academic Millions of Visitors to European Cities

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