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The diagram below shows how one particular company produces deep-fried salted peanuts. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how one particular company produces deep-fried salted peanuts. Edy9D
The diagram illustrates the process of deep-fried salt peanuts manufacture and preparation for sale on the market. As the chart show, there are 8 stages in the production of deep-fried salted peanuts. The process begins with the harvesting and ends with the packing and delivery to the shops and small traders. Looking at the first stages of the process, peanuts must be harvested from the tree. The next step is removing shells and then they are putting into a box for about 50 kilograms and collected in the containers which are delivered to the store.
The diagram illustrates the process of deep-fried salt peanuts manufacture and preparation for sale on the market.

As the chart
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, there are 8 stages in the production of deep-fried salted peanuts. The process
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begins
with the harvesting and ends with the packing and delivery to the shops and
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small
traders.

Looking at the
first
stages of the process, peanuts
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must
be harvested
from the tree. The
next
step is removing
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shells and
then they are putting into a box for about 50 kilograms and collected in the containers which
are delivered
to the store.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how one particular company produces deep-fried salted peanuts.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
95 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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