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Children are responsible for all the things which family member need. But if they are not capable it is better for Children and family member to swift at old housing. Today in this essay I will discuss both views.

Children are responsible for all the things which family member need. But if they are not capable it is better for Children and family member to swift at old housing. Today in this essay I will 5L1Nm
Children should take care of their family member because era is not worthy to take care of our family member there is lot of politics in house each person care for themselves and their children nobody care for them. Person care only if their parents are successful or has property. Otherwise, no one is interested in it. There are very few people in the world how to take of their family with thinking of any rewards. I have seen many people how does not care of their family members at home but when there is function or something like get-together the care turns into politeness because their respect and their reputation. If children are not able to take care of their parents, then there is facility of old age housing. If their family member is going there they could be tension free and away from that quarrelling atmosphere through that then can live properly and their children can also live. Old age housing is the area in which they can enjoy their live very well as there are lot of person of their generation with them they can interact properly which they are not able to do with their Children or scare from them. Even there is option in housing they can choose different children or in other words we can say adopted by other member.
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with thinking of any rewards. I have
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turns into politeness
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their respect and their reputation.

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of their parents, then there is facility of
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is going there they could be tension free and away from that quarrelling atmosphere through that then can
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age housing is the area in which they can enjoy their
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well as there are
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lot of
person of their generation with them they can interact
properly
which they are not able to do with their
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Children
or scare from them. Even there is option in housing they can choose
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different
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children
or
in other words
we can say adopted by other
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IELTS academic Children are responsible for all the things which family member need. But if they are not capable it is better for Children and family member to swift at old housing. Today in this essay I will

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