Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The diagram below shows how ketchup is produced.Summarise the information for a university lecture.

The diagram below shows how ketchup is produced. oV9EX
The process chart illustrates the information about how ketchup manufacture with several steps. Overall, the process consists of fifteen different stages which utilize to make tomatoes ketchup and it start from picking tomatoes along with finish serve with fast food. In the initial of the process, the tomatoes are being picking from plants and put into basket by women. At the second stage, the quailty of tomatoes check which is good or bad, then export to factory by truck. The skin of tomatoes is peel, seeds and italk removed from tomatoes in the next stage. The peeled tomatoes put into the mammoth container where it crushed and the mixture of sugar, vinegar, and salt added in the crused tomatoes which bowl on the heat into the sauce pan and leaves for cold around 2 hours. Following that, tomatoes ketchup are being pouring in the bottles along with labelling. Apart from this, the quailty of ketchup check and keep bottles in the box which made from paper. Finally, it deliver to supermarket and severd with humburger and fries.
The process chart illustrates the information about how
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ketchup
manufacture with several steps.

Overall
, the process consists of fifteen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
stages which utilize to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
tomatoes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ketchup
and it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
from picking tomatoes along with finish serve with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
food.

In the initial of the process, the tomatoes are being picking from plants and put into basket by women. At the second stage, the
Possible spelling mistake found.
quailty
of tomatoes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
which is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
, then export to factory by truck. The skin of tomatoes is peel, seeds and
Possible spelling mistake found.
italk
removed from tomatoes in the
next
stage. The peeled tomatoes put into the mammoth container where it crushed and the mixture of sugar, vinegar, and salt
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
crused
tomatoes which bowl on the heat into the sauce pan and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
around 2 hours. Following that, tomatoes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ketchup
are being pouring in the bottles along with labelling. Apart from this, the
Possible spelling mistake found.
quailty
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ketchup
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
bottles in the box which made from paper.
Finally
, it
Did you mean "delivers"?
deliver
to supermarket and
Possible spelling mistake found.
severd
with
Possible spelling mistake found.
humburger
and fries.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how ketchup is produced.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    the chart below shows the number of male and female
    The bar chart shows the gender distribution of students doing scientific research across a range of disciplines at a UK university in 2009. In five of six disciplines, males outnumbered females. Male students made up a particularly large proportion of the student group in subjects related to the st...
  • 6.5band
    Students' main reason to study and their employers support
    The two charts below explain the main background of many students to study, according to their age categories and how the students’ employers contribute to support their study which measured from the employers’ act to give time off and fees help. Overall, the graphs show fluctuating trends. Specifi...
  • 6band
    The following pie chart show the use of social media by men and women in Australia in 2011 and 2014
    As is presented in the pie graph, in 2011, a quarter of males and above then females used social media everyday. The highest proportion of women used social media once in a week as compared to the men, which accounted to be 39% and 12% respectively. Also, both genders used the social media few time ...
  • 6band
    The following pie charts compare the domestic expenditure on various goods and services across the world in 2001 and 1971.
    The given pie charts demonstrate the comparison between 2001 and 1971 in the domestic expenditure on several goods and services across the globe. Overall, in 1971, major expenses were done on food whereas cars accounted for the most proportion of expenditure in 2001. It is evident that expenditure...
  • 6band
    study for interest or career and support
    There are given two graphs representing the reasons for study according to age in the first one and the second one showing how much support the students receive from their employers in different ages. The first chart shows the two main reasons for study: career and interest. Under the age of 26 mos...
  • 6band
    Main reasons for migration to or from UK in 2007
    The two pie charts illustrate major reasons why people came to and left the UK in 2007. Overall, people immigrated mostly for fixed occupation and formal education, while emigrated people principally looked for definite jobs. To begin with the two biggest purposes of immigration, the significant pe...





Get more results for topic:
  • The diagram below shows how ketchup is produced.Summarise the information for a university lecture.