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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

This picture illustrates the process of manufacturing instant noodles. This process consists of eight steps. In the beginning of the process lorry which is loaded with flour attached to storage silos and put flour on them. Then, flour is put to machine and make a mixer with adding water and oil. After that, this mixer is rolled using rollers. As next step, rolled mixer is created as dough sheets using same machine, Now dough sheets are separated as dough strips. These strips are next enter to separate section. In this step, noodles discs are made. After that, cooking oil is added to noodles discs and leave to dry, Next step, vegetables are added to noodles and divide in to spices Now, cups are ready to put noodles. As a final stage, labels are ready to labelling process. After labels are attached, then put a seal in every instant instant noodles cup Now, these instant noodles are ready to release to supermarket shelves for consumers.
This picture illustrates the
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of manufacturing instant
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noodles
. This
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consists of eight steps.

In the beginning of the
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process
‘lorry’ is a common British expression. Consider using expressions more common to American English.
lorry
which
is loaded
with flour attached to storage silos and
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put
flour on them. Then, flour is
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put
to machine and
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make
a mixer with adding water and oil. After that, this mixer
is rolled
using rollers. As
next
step, rolled mixer
is created
as dough sheets using same machine,
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Now
dough sheets
are separated
as dough strips. These strips are
next
enter to separate section. In this step,
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noodles
discs
are made
. After that, cooking oil is
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added
to
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noodles
discs and
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leave
to dry,
Next
step, vegetables are
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added
to
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noodles
and divide
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in to
spices
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Now
, cups are ready to
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put
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noodles
. As a final stage, labels are ready to labelling
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process
. After labels
are attached
, then
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put
a seal in every
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instant instant
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noodles
cup
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Now
, these instant
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are ready to release to supermarket shelves for consumers.
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