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The two maps below show an island,before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. B1Ea
The two maps illustrate information about an island, before and after the establishment of few tourist amenities. The map is measured in meters. From the overall analysis, it is manifest that the island has significant change over the period with the inclusion of new facilities. On the one hand, it is clearly seen that in first map there is no facilities of toursim in the island. However, there was only beach and few trees in isalnd. In terms of second map, there was a swimming pool near beach in the west of island. . Also, pier was add in the south of the island. Whereas, in the middle of island there was reception hall for tourist beside there is a restaurant was located in the north of the island. Moreover, island had an accommodation in the south-east. There were few boats in the south of island. Despite vehicle track and footpath was constructed in island to reach all facilities in an island.
The two
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illustrate information about an
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island
,
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before
and after the establishment of few tourist amenities. The
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map
is measured
in meters. From the
overall
analysis, it is manifest that the
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island
has significant
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change
over the period with the inclusion of new facilities. On the one hand, it is
clearly
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seen
that in
first
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map
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there is no facilities
of
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toursim
in the
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island
.
However
, there was
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only
beach and few trees in
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isalnd
. In terms of second
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, there was a swimming pool near beach in the west of
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island
.
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Also
, pier was
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in the south of the
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island
. Whereas, in the middle of
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island
there was reception hall for tourist beside there is a restaurant
was located
in the north of the
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island
.
Moreover
,
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island
had
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an accommodation
in the south-east. There were few boats in the south of
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island
. Despite vehicle
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track
and footpath
was constructed
in
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island
to reach all facilities in an
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island
.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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