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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. lyeK
The chart above illustrates the number of population in Japan from the year 1950 up to 2055. The information given shows a stable increase in numbers. Though, it is predicted to have a decrease in the near future starting from 2010 to 2055. In addition, the only percentage shown is for the total of population aged 65 years over in 1950, 2005, 2035 and 2055. Japan's population fluctuated from 1950 to 1970 with 84. 1 million going up to 104. 5 million. Afterwards, the amount only increased slightly in the year 1975 to 1990 with 111. 9 million up to 123. 6. Then the information shows a stable number of population from year 1995 to 2005 with around 127 million people. However, it seems to then decreased and is predicted to continue until 2055 with a big decline. The table seen under the chart shows populations of people in the age 65 and over with a big increase from 4. 1 million with the percentage of 4. 9% in the year 1950 rising to around 36. 5 million with 41. 0% in the year 2055.
The chart above illustrates the number of
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population
in Japan from the
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1950 up to 2055.

The information
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a stable increase in numbers.
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percentage shown is for the total of
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aged 65 years over in 1950, 2005, 2035 and 2055.

Japan's
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fluctuated from 1950 to 1970 with 84. 1
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million
going up to 104. 5
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million
. Afterwards, the amount
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only
increased
slightly
in the
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1975 to 1990 with 111. 9
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up to 123. 6. Then the information
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shows
a stable number of
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population
from
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1995 to 2005 with around 127
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million
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people
.
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, it seems to then decreased and
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big
decline.

The table
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under the chart
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shows
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populations
of
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people
in the age 65 and over with a
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big
increase from 4. 1
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million
with the percentage of 4. 9% in the
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year
1950 rising to around 36. 5
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with 41. 0% in the
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2055.
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IELTS academic The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

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