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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram depicts the nine-step process of production of ethanol fuel from corn. In the initial steps of this process and prior to the addition of water, corn must be stored and then milled. Afterwards, it is cooked for four hours after the addition of. The next step appears to be the most time-consuming. Fermenting the cooked corn must take about fourty-eight hours before moving on to the separation process. The separation step, unlike other steps, branches, leading to two different products, a liquid and a solid. During separation, a solid by-product is extracted which leaves a liquid product for what remains of the ethanol production process. Before transporting the liquid, it must undergo the five-hour process of ethanol purification. It can then be stored a second time before being transported to the demanding party.

The diagram depicts the nine-step process of production of ethanol fuel from corn.

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steps
 of this process and prior to the addition of water, corn This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be stored
 and then milled. Afterwards, it is cooked
 for four hours after the addition of. The next
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step
 appears to be the most time-consuming. Fermenting the cooked corn This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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fourty-eight
 hours This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 moving on to the separation process.

The separation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, unlike other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
, branches, leading to two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 products, a liquid and a solid. During separation, a solid by-product is extracted
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 a liquid product for what remains of the ethanol production process.

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Before
 transporting the liquid, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 undergo the five-hour process of ethanol purification. It can then be stored
 a second time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being transported
 to the demanding party. 