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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram depicts the nine-step process of production of ethanol fuel from corn. In the initial steps of this process and prior to the addition of water, corn must be stored and then milled. Afterwards, it is cooked for four hours after the addition of. The next step appears to be the most time-consuming. Fermenting the cooked corn must take about fourty-eight hours before moving on to the separation process. The separation step, unlike other steps, branches, leading to two different products, a liquid and a solid. During separation, a solid by-product is extracted which leaves a liquid product for what remains of the ethanol production process. Before transporting the liquid, it must undergo the five-hour process of ethanol purification. It can then be stored a second time before being transported to the demanding party.
The diagram depicts the nine-step process of production of ethanol fuel from corn.

In the initial
steps
of this process and prior to the addition of water, corn
must
be stored
and then milled. Afterwards, it
is cooked
for four hours after the addition of. The
next
step
appears to be the most time-consuming. Fermenting the cooked corn
must
take about
fourty-eight
hours
before
moving on to the separation process.

The separation
step
, unlike other
steps
, branches, leading to two
different
products, a liquid and a solid. During separation, a solid by-product
is extracted
which
leaves
a liquid product for what remains of the ethanol production process.

Before
transporting the liquid, it
must
undergo the five-hour process of ethanol purification. It can then
be stored
a second time
before
being transported
to the demanding party.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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