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The diagram below shows how hydro-electric power is generated. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates information about the production of hydro-electric power. Overall, there are 12 stages in the process, beginning with sun shines and culminating in energy supply for houses. In the beginning, sunlight hits water sources, as a result, evaporated water to the atmosphere turns to the rain and fills the reservoir with water again. There is a dam in the reservoir that prevents water from flowing down. Following this, water goes through the opening and closing valve and arrives to the turbine. This stage is divided into two parts. Flowing water from the turbine reachs to the pump and goes back to the reservoir, where water circulates continuously. In the next stage, water in the turbine turns into the energy, following this, generated energy goes through the high voltage cables to the transformers, then, to the transformer station. Finally, energy is provided via underground cables for the hospitals, schools, houses.
The diagram illustrates information about the production of hydro-electric power.

Overall
, there are 12 stages in the process, beginning with sun shines and culminating in
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energy
supply for
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houses
.

In the beginning, sunlight hits
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water
sources,
as a result
, evaporated
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water
to the atmosphere turns to the rain and fills the reservoir with
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water
again. There is a dam in the reservoir that
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prevents
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water
from flowing down. Following this,
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water
goes through the opening and closing valve and arrives to the turbine. This stage
is divided
into two parts. Flowing
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water
from the turbine
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reachs
to the pump and goes back to the reservoir, where
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water
circulates
continuously
.

In the
next
stage,
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water
in the turbine turns into the
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energy
, following this, generated
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energy
goes through the high voltage cables to the transformers, then, to the transformer station.
Finally
,
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energy
is provided
via underground cables for the hospitals, schools,
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houses
.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how hydro-electric power is generated.

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4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
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