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The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. DlAm7
into do back again usable shape or state. illustration divided into 6 stage. Overall, progress starts in home or work place with waste glass item. In addition, glass items gone into 3 different process after transportations arrived to recycle plant, which are washing and strelising, crushing and melting and also moulding step. First of all, waste glass recycle process commenced with recycle bin, some people consumed products that are contains glass case. For instance, bottles and cans, they put them into do bins, after then these bins come to the second stage, which is treatment plant. On the other hand, with 3 stage of the process applications are beginned with which is washing and sterilising process taken by special machines for this specific job. Furhermore, before 5. stage taken into consideration 4. level of process starts off to action in crushing and melting machine. Moreover, melted glasses are poured into own moulds to shape it in 5. level. As last step, after 5. level process proceed to 6. stage which is delivery of the reproduced glass materials to supermarket.
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into
do back again usable shape or state.
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illustration
divided into 6 stage.

Overall
, progress
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starts
in home or work place with waste
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glass
item.
In addition
,
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glass
items gone into 3
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different
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process
after transportations arrived to recycle plant, which are washing and
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strelising
, crushing and melting and
also
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moulding
step.

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First of all
, waste
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glass
recycle
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process
commenced with recycle bin,
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some
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people
consumed products that are contains
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glass
case.
For instance
, bottles and cans, they put them into do bins, after then these bins
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come
to the second
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stage
, which is treatment plant.

On the other hand
, with 3
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stage
of the
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process
applications are
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beginned
with which is washing and
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sterilising
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taken by special machines for this specific job.
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Furhermore
,
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before
5.
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stage
taken into consideration 4.
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level
of
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process
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starts
off to action in crushing and melting machine.
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, melted glasses
are poured
into
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own
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moulds
to shape it in 5.
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level
.

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level
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proceed to 6.
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stage
which is delivery of the reproduced
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glass
materials to supermarket.
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