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students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010

students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010 YLeBK
The table illustrates the IELTS band score of the students from countries, namely Germany, France, Indonesia, and Malaysia who took their exams in 2010. Overall, the highest result in listening was achieved by the students from Germany, while Malay students got the least overall. Simultaneously, German students succeeded on average the highest overall among other students of different countries. The table shows that, German students are achieved the highest overall band score in three skills out of four, such as Listening, Writing and Speaking. The French candidates got the highest score in Speaking of 6. 9 out of 9 which is same with Malay students. However, their least score was in Reading of 6. 1 which is close to Indonesians. In general, French students are weaker in Listening and Reading skills comparing to the Germans. Writing is relatively scored high by German and French students. The Indonesians are in the second place after the Germans in Speaking.
The table illustrates the IELTS band
score
of the
students
from countries,
namely
Germany, France, Indonesia, and Malaysia who took their exams in 2010.

Overall
, the highest result in listening
was achieved
by the
students
from Germany, while Malay
students
got
the least
overall
.
Simultaneously
, German
students
succeeded on average the highest
overall
among other
students
of
different
countries.

The table
shows
that, German
students
are achieved
the highest
overall
band
score
in three
skills
out of four, such as Listening, Writing and Speaking.

The French candidates
got
the highest
score
in Speaking of 6. 9 out of 9 which is same with Malay
students
.
However
, their least
score
was in Reading of 6. 1 which is close to Indonesians.
In general
, French
students
are weaker in Listening and Reading
skills
comparing to the Germans. Writing is
relatively
scored high by German and French
students
. The Indonesians are in the second place after the Germans in Speaking.
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IELTS academic students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
157 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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