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The plans below shows the change of the particular area from 1965 to the present day and the plans also give a description of the proposed changes in future.

The plans below shows the change of the particular area from 1965 to the present day and the plans also give a description of the proposed changes in future. 3a2aJ
The maps illustrate the layout of the specific area during 1965 and alternation took place till now, and future plans explain the proposed modifications in following year. Overall, it can be lucid that the area witnessed dramatic changes over the period. Although river Tamil will remain constant in all the years; however, car park will be added in the future. Commencing with, in 1965, trees were grown towards north west, on the contrary car park is installed by chopping down trees and forests in present.
The maps illustrate the layout of the specific area during 1965 and alternation took place till
now
, and future plans
explain
the proposed modifications in following year.

Overall
, it can be lucid that the area witnessed dramatic
changes
over the period. Although river Tamil will remain constant in all the years;
however
, car park will be
added
in the future.

Commencing with, in 1965, trees
were grown
towards
north west
,
on the contrary
car park
is installed
by chopping down trees and forests in present.
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IELTS academic The plans below shows the change of the particular area from 1965 to the present day and the plans also give a description of the proposed changes in future.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
85 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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