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the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

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The illustration highlights the various stages involved in the production of electricity, from the original ingredient of water. Overall, there are five different stages included in this process. The whole power plant production process starts when the cold water inside the specific tank for water storage is pumped down to the underground injection well. After this injection well, this cold water automatically is passed to the production well, preceded by being moved to the geothermal zone. After the hot rocks zone, the initial cold water becomes the hot water, which is transported towards the production well’s direction, followed by pumping up the hot water using tube/pipe. The next stage for this hot water proceeds the travel inside the special condenser for the warm water and this condenser is the final station before the end of this generating process, since after that the hot water is transported inside to the turbine, which is powered by steam. This turbine has a direct connection with a generator, that is why immediately moved this steam into the generator for the electricity.
The illustration highlights the various stages involved in the
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production
of electricity, from the original ingredient of
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water
.
Overall
, there are five
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different
stages included in this process.

The whole power plant
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production
process
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starts
when the
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cold
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water
inside the specific tank for
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water
storage
is pumped
down to the underground injection
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well
. After this injection
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well
, this
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cold
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water
automatically
is passed
to the
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production
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well
, preceded by being
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moved
to the geothermal zone. After the hot rocks zone, the initial
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cold
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water
becomes the hot
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water
, which
is transported
towards the
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production
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well’s
direction, followed by pumping up the hot
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water
using tube/pipe. The
next
stage for this hot
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water
proceeds the travel inside the special condenser for the warm
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water
and this condenser is the final station
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before
the
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end
of this generating process, since after that the hot
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water
is transported
inside to the turbine, which
is powered
by steam. This turbine has a direct connection with a generator,
that is
why immediately
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moved
this steam into the generator for the electricity.
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IELTS academic the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

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