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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls In the UK, divided into three categories, from 1999&2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls In the UK, divided into three categories, from 1999&2012. LQX3
The given chart compares that the duration of telephone calls made by different lines in the UK between 1995 and 2002. Overall, it is clear that local-fixed line was the most common call type, whereas mobiles(all calls) were the least used in this nation. However, national and international-fixed line experienced a upward trend, but the figure for local-fixed line rose rapidly and then fell back the end of the period. In 1995, local fixed line was used to make calls during more than 70 billion minutes, doubling the figure for national and international-fixed line. At that time, mobile phone was the lowest of all the categories, with under 5 billion minutes. From that year to 1990, the local-fixed line has been used frequently, its figure reaching 90 billion minutes, but four years after that, it had fallen slightly to the initial point. In contrast, the national and international-fixed line calls displayed a similar upward trend, it was about 75 billion minutes by 2002, and the calls made from mobiles increase significantly 45 billion minutes by the end of the period.
The
given
chart compares that the duration of telephone
calls
made by
different
lines
in the UK between 1995 and 2002.

Overall
, it is
clear
that local-
fixed
line
was the most common
call
type, whereas mobiles(all
calls)
were the least
used
in this nation.
However
, national and international-
fixed
line
experienced
a
upward trend,
but
the figure for local-
fixed
line
rose
rapidly
and then fell back the
end
of the period.

In 1995, local
fixed
line
was
used
to
make
calls
during more than 70
billion
minutes, doubling the figure for national and international-
fixed
line
. At that time, mobile phone was the lowest of all the categories, with under 5
billion
minutes.

From that year to 1990, the local-
fixed
line
has been
used
frequently
, its figure reaching 90
billion
minutes,
but
four years after that, it had fallen
slightly
to the initial point.
In contrast
, the national and international-
fixed
line
calls
displayed a similar upward trend, it was about 75
billion
minutes by 2002, and the
calls
made from mobiles increase
significantly
45
billion
minutes by the
end
of the period.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls In the UK, divided into three categories, from 1999&2012.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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