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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. k0lM
The three pie charts give information about the average consumption of three nutrients by the people of US into their meals. High consumption of these nutrients can result to various health issues. Overall, these nutrients in meals like breakfast and lunch looks even whereas in meals like snacks and dinner looks uneven. Breakfast contains immensely low amount of these nutrients and all the three nutrients are approximately evenly distributed in this meal whereas if we talk about lunch then it have a bit high amount of these nutrients in comparison to breakfast. Dinner and snacks are considerably having high amount of inclusion of these nutrients and there is very uneven distribution of nutrients. In comparison to breakfast and lunch these two meals are having huge amount of these nutrients which can make people of the states unhealthy. In conclusion, there is a need to improve the nutrients of snacks and dinner for the people of the United States whereas breakfast and lunch are good to go with these nutrients.
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like breakfast and lunch looks even whereas in
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IELTS academic The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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