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The bar graph reveals the information about December retails rate.

The bar graph reveals the information about December retails rate. nolK

The presented bar chart illustrates the information of retail sales in December. Units are measured in billions. Overall, it is immensely clear that, motor vehicles and parts dealers was accounted as highest sales. However, the least sale was of furniture in that period. At the fleeting glance, it is vividly clear that, the sales of restaurants and bars as well as gasoline was almost equal that was about dollar 40, 000, 00. Secondly, the department of general merchandise’s sale was almost 30% higher than no store retailers. Next, there was negligible difference between the sales of misc and sporting goods, and hobby. The sales of clothing was atleast dollars 20, 000, 00. With more scrutinising the graph, it shows that, the highest sales was in December of motor vehicles and parts dealers. Which was figured nearby dollar 80, 000, 00. As moving further, building materials and garden equipment were sold atleast 3% more instead of health, prescription, and personal. Along with this, the difference in sales of electronics and appliance stores as well as furniture were insignificant. In the end, the sales of groceries and liquor was about dollar 60, 000, 00.

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