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the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity OVM27
The diagram illustrates how the electric energy is produced and transferred to the geotermal power plant. The process has five main stages. At the beginning, cold water is pumped down, exactly 4. 5 kilometers under the ground. On that level the injection well takes place, and the second phase starts. Water is going through the well and then through the zone of hot rocks, also known as the geotermal zone, around 5 kilometers bellow the surface of the ground. After the transfer, water is warmed up and ready to go through the production well which is on the opposite side of the injection one. Hot water is pumped up with the help of the well, and it finally goes back to the ground level. In the next stage, water goes through the condeser, and after the condensation process the water changes its state and becomes steam. Finally, the turbine which is powered by the steam, further poweres the generator. The generator then produces electricity, and the energy is transferred to the power plant, which is the end of the process shown. In conclusion, through the process that uses geotermal energy, electricity that we relly upon today is being produced.
The diagram illustrates how the electric energy
is produced
and transferred to the
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geotermal
power plant.

The
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process
has five main stages. At the beginning,
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cold
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water
is pumped
down, exactly 4. 5 kilometers under the ground. On that level the injection
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well
takes place, and the second phase
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starts
.
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is going
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through
the
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well
and then
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through
the zone of hot rocks,
also
known as the
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geotermal
zone, around 5 kilometers bellow the surface of the ground. After the transfer,
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water
is warmed
up and ready to go
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through
the production
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well
which is on the opposite side of the injection one. Hot
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water
is pumped
up with the
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help
of the
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well
, and it
finally
goes back to the ground level.

In the
next
stage,
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water
goes
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through
the
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condeser
, and after the condensation
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process
the
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water
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changes
its state and becomes steam.
Finally
, the turbine which
is powered
by the steam,
further
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poweres
the generator. The generator then produces electricity, and the energy
is transferred
to the power plant, which is the
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end
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process
shown.

In conclusion
,
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through
the
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that
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uses
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energy, electricity that we
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today
is
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.

IELTS academic the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

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