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The diagram below shows how flourishing made from wheat

The diagram below shows how flourishing made from wheat ArJDl
The illustration demonstrates the process of producing flour from grain. It may be noted that there are 9 stages from grain handled to placed flour in the supermarket In the initial stages of the process, the wheat is shifted to pieces before being purified from the silverskin and stalk. Following this clean and sorted wheat is grinding into flour on a special factory machine. On the next stage flour is bleached with chemical liquid to remove all bacteria and then it is stored for a time. When flour is completely ready vitamins are added there. In the subsequent stage ready flour is sorted into packages and labelled. The last stage involves transportation packages to the track which are moved into shops for selling to customers and later consumption Overall, the diagram shows that despite the fact that the process of producing flour is done mostly in factories with the help of machinery, it is still lengthy involving several stages.
The illustration demonstrates the process of producing
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flour
from grain. It may
be noted
that there are 9
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stages
from grain handled to placed
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flour
in the
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supermarket


In the initial
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stages
of the process, the wheat
is shifted
to pieces
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before
being purified
from the
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silverskin
and stalk.

Following this clean and sorted wheat is grinding into
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flour
on a special factory machine. On the
next
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stage
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flour
is bleached
with chemical liquid to remove all bacteria and then it
is stored
for a time.
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When
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flour
is completely ready vitamins are
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added
there.

In the subsequent
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stage
ready
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flour
is sorted
into packages and labelled.

The last
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stage
involves transportation packages to the
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track
which are
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moved
into shops for selling to customers and later consumption

Overall
, the diagram
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shows
that despite the fact that the process of producing
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flour
is done
mostly
in factories with the
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help
of machinery, it is
still
lengthy involving several
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stages
.
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