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The diagram below shows how flourishing made from wheat

The diagram below shows how flourishing made from wheat ArJDl

The illustration demonstrates the process of producing flour from grain. It may be noted that there are 9 stages from grain handled to placed flour in the supermarket In the initial stages of the process, the wheat is shifted to pieces before being purified from the silverskin and stalk. Following this clean and sorted wheat is grinding into flour on a special factory machine. On the next stage flour is bleached with chemical liquid to remove all bacteria and then it is stored for a time. When flour is completely ready vitamins are added there. In the subsequent stage ready flour is sorted into packages and labelled. The last stage involves transportation packages to the track which are moved into shops for selling to customers and later consumption Overall, the diagram shows that despite the fact that the process of producing flour is done mostly in factories with the help of machinery, it is still lengthy involving several stages.

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flour
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stages
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flour
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stages
 of the process, the wheat is shifted
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before
being purified
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silverskin
 and stalk.

Following this clean and sorted wheat is grinding into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrate
flour
 on a special factory machine. On the next
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stage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrate
flour
is bleached
 with chemical liquid to remove all bacteria and then it is stored
 for a time. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
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flour
 is completely ready vitamins are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 there.

In the subsequent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 ready You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrate
flour
is sorted
 into packages and labelled.

The last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 involves transportation packages to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 which are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 into shops for selling to customers and later consumption

Overall
, the diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that despite the fact that the process of producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrate
flour
is done
mostly
 in factories with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of machinery, it is still
 lengthy involving several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
. 