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The benefits of a smartphone

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Nowaday, smart phones play an important role. It has become a necessary equipment in people's daily life. First, smart phones are used for communication. We can immediately make calls, send and receive messages anytime, anywhere, because it is portable. Using a smart phone is more convenient than using a phone, and faster than writing a letter. In addition, we can use smartphones for entertainment. Listening to music, watching movies and playing games are some interesting features. In addition, we can also use it to take photos and videos to keep our happy time. Finally, we can easily find the information we need through a smartphone. Once connected to a wireless or mobile data network, we can surf the online and even use maps to find locations.

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