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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the progress of making ethanol fuel. Ethanol fuel is made from corn, as shown in the picture. The progress contains eight steps from getting the needed ingredient to transporting the final product. Corn, which is the main ingredient, is brought from the farm and stored. The corn is then milled into powder in order to prepare for the next step in the progess. Water is added to the minced corn, the mixture is cooked in four hours before moving to the next step of fermenting. The fermenting stage then lasts forty eight hours. The fermented mixtured go though another stage called separating, in which it will be split into solid by-product and liquid. In order to produce the final product, the liquid have to be purified in a five-hour-procedure before the storing step for the purifying ethanol, and then get delivered to the place it is needed.

The diagram gives information about the progress of making ethanol fuel.

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Corn
, which is the main ingredient, is brought
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corn
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step
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. Water is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
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corn
, the mixture is cooked
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before
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