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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. 7aL0A
The graph illustrates the amount of bachelors who had been graduated from the college or university from year 1992 to 2007 in Canada. Overall, the highest number of graduates were females in year 2006 whereas lowest number of males can be evident in the same year. In year 1992, Males graduates were 70, 000 which was considerably less than females which was 100, 000. Consequently, in year 1999, women graduates rapidly decreased to approximately 1% while in terms of males the number of students plunged to almost 72, 000. After that in the year 2004, the amount of graduates in terms of females suddenly increased to 129, 000, similarly, men graduates were rapidly increased till 88, 000. In case of females during the year 2006, the number of graduates rocketed to 97, 000. Meanwhile, males students were persistently surge to approximately 149, 000.
The graph illustrates the amount of bachelors who had
been graduated
from the college or university from
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year
1992 to 2007 in Canada.

Overall
, the highest
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number
of
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graduates
were
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females
in
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year
2006 whereas lowest
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number
of
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males
can be evident in the same year.

In
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year
1992,
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Males
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graduates
were 70, 000 which was
considerably
less than
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females
which was 100, 000.
Consequently
, in
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year
1999, women
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graduates
rapidly
decreased to approximately 1% while in terms of
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males
the
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number
of students plunged to almost 72, 000. After that in the
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year
2004, the amount of
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graduates
in terms of
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females
suddenly
increased to 129, 000,
similarly
,
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men
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graduates
were
rapidly
increased till 88, 000.

In case of
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females
during the
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year
2006, the
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number
of
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graduates
rocketed to 97, 000. Meanwhile,
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males
students were
persistently
surge to approximately 149, 000.
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