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The diagram below shows how electricity is produced in a nuclear power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram below shows how electricity is produced in a nuclear power station. ldeV9
The illustrated diagram explains the step by step process of electricity generation with the help of a nuclear power station. Overall, from the production to the distribution, 11 components have a significant role in each step. According to the given diagram, firstly, in the containment building, the steam generators produce steam with the help of the uranium fuel. Subsequently, this steam is transferred to the turbines through carrying pipes called steam pipes. This steam rotates turbines and with the help of a generator, energy is produced. In the next step, the transformer convert generated energy into electricity. The resulted electricity is now supplied to polls and from there it is distributed for a variety of uses like household and commercial purposes. After production of electricity is completed, the cold water is passed into the turbine chamber and steam generators with the help of water source and cooling tower to cool down and start the further process.
The illustrated diagram
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the
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step by step
process of
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electricity
generation with the
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help
of a nuclear power station.

Overall
, from the production to the distribution, 11 components have a significant role in each step.

According to the
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given
diagram,
firstly
, in the containment building, the steam generators produce steam with the
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help
of the uranium fuel.
Subsequently
, this steam
is transferred
to the turbines through carrying pipes called steam pipes. This steam rotates turbines and with the
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help
of a generator, energy
is produced
. In the
next
step, the transformer convert generated energy into
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electricity
. The resulted
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electricity
is
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now
supplied to polls and from there it
is distributed
for a variety of
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uses
like household and commercial purposes.

After production of
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electricity
is completed
, the
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cold
water
is passed
into the turbine chamber and steam generators with the
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help
of water source and cooling tower to cool down and
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start
the
further
process.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is produced in a nuclear power station.

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